Eh...
- too much editing, you gotta add some actual jokes in there :P
- using older memes (not a problem, but it can get annoying, such as the part when "You Spin Me Right Around" was playing, it's not funny anymore. Also, wtf was with scenes of the Super Mario Super Show,etc. in the background at parts of the poop?)
- too much explosions (that one in Dying for pie gets annoying as seeing many poops doing it)
- the title card beginning was a bit too long
I can understand the first poop isn't the best, you still tried and next time you can try harder. :)
