I liked this short. I liked that it was done completely in rhyme, it made it feel a little like a Dr. Seuss story and it made me feel weirdly nostalgic. It's also one of very few times where fourth-wall breakers don't bother me.
This and Reef Blower are what I think shorts should be like. Just cute little ideas that you couldn't make a full episode out of and that have a spin put on them (no dialogue in Reef Blower, rhyming in this one).
I'm glad they decided to make this a short. There wasn't much humour (except maybe for Squidward's acne), but everyone was in character, the plot was decent, and I thought the rhymes were clever and for the most part not very forced. I think Patchy worked better for this kind of thing than the French narrator, who'd probably inject some snark in there. Sounds like it could be a storybook. I'll give it a 7.5/10 as a solid short that had one concept and executed it well.
I really enjoyed this one. Brief, yes, but pretty funny and I liked Tom Kenny's Dr. Seuss like narration. Out of all the SpongeBob shorts made in this season, for me, this would have to be the best one.