I'm glad they decided to make this a short. There wasn't much humour (except maybe for Squidward's acne), but everyone was in character, the plot was decent, and I thought the rhymes were clever and for the most part not very forced. I think Patchy worked better for this kind of thing than the French narrator, who'd probably inject some snark in there. Sounds like it could be a storybook. I'll give it a 7.5/10 as a solid short that had one concept and executed it well.