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This topic is going to start being updated on Triple ToonTastic Tuesday (October 18), but I wanted to start it early so you can be warmed up to it, and probably post stuff like predictions or general questions about the show being talked about in advance to me starting this up for real.

Things are just about to get 20% cooler.
 

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Sounds great. Can't wait to see what your opinions are.
 

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One thing I'll do is start watching the episodes to this show, before reading your review, I'm not sure whether I'll become a fan, but as I'll be new to this you just never know.
 

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Boy, are we going in for a ride. Like we say on Derpibooru, the ride never ends.
Now that this is on a Nickelodeon-themed website, I think this is appropriate.
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I'm planning on doing an evaluation of my opinions for all 4 of my personal favourite animated series- MLP:FiM, The Simpsons, Phineas and Ferb and of course, SpongeBob. Note that I'm not going to be updating any of them nearly as frequently as with SpongeBob, maybe because I might alternate between this, Phineas and Ferb and MLP:FiM as my secondary review show, furthermore, SpongeBob is where I got my start, so I'm going to hold onto that just a little longer. With that out of the way, this is the only show here in which I haven't watched every episode of a particular season, and this is one of those episode in which I'm going in fresh. MLP:FiM is a strange specimen when it comes to TV animation, it came out, had somewhat famous animation people behind it, attained a cult following, and now opinions about whether it's still good or not fly all over the place like Rainbow Dash on an apple cider bender, so this review series should be interesting.

Current Season: Season 1
Original airdates: October 10 2010-May 6 2011
Episode Count: 26
Segment Count: 25
Additional Information: The only season to have all the animation done by Studio B Productions as opposed to DHX Studios, The only season in which Twilight Sparkle appears in every episode, The only season to have Lauren Faust be the executive producer throughout the whole run, The only season to have an EI rating

Friendship is Magic part 1/Mare in the Moon (Season 1, Episode 1)
Original Airdate: October 10 2010
Episode 1 non-compressed, Episode 1a compressed)
Plot: Twilight Sparkle and Spike are sent by Princess Celestia to Ponyville to make new friends
Written by Lauren Faust

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6 years! A lot has changed for our world in the ever-extending time in which My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, the TV adaptation made for the 4th generation of the famous toyline, has been on the air. Adults have started to accept cartoons as a serious form of entertainment more frequently, the 8th generation of video games has started and it's basically a cockfight outside of mobile devices at this point, the world has passed 7 billion living humans and is still growing and teenagers now use this website called Vine to make complete fools out of themselves on the internet, among other things.

It's not just outside of MLP:FiM in which major differences have come. Discord has come as a villain and has since been reformed, Twilight is now an alicorn princess, there's apparently a parallel dimension where everybody's human, the Elements of Harmony have been replaced by rainbow-thingies, the Cutie Mark Crusaders have recieved their cutie marks, babies can now be alicorns and Twilight has reformed a time-travelling, cult-leading, magic-abusing sociopath called Mary Sue Starlight Glimmer. With all that, would it be hard for me to take this episode seriously, or will I feel more comfortable with an unintentionally more retro vibe from the series? As I've been hesitent to watch two-parters for quite some time, this may depend on how I feel about the style, so keep that in mind.

It opens with a legend regarding two magical sisters, with the younger sister (going by the name Nightmare Moon) originally being in charge of controlling the moon, but since she was hissy-pissy about nopony (ugh, pony vocabulary) appreciating the night as opposed to the day, she unleashed her inner rage and made it so that the night lasted forever, which would be like if HAL Laboratory wasn't happy about the lack of new Kirby games, so they sabotaged Nintendo and made every new game Kirby, which hey, I'm down with unless they involve touchscreens. Anyway, the eldest locked her inside the moon using "the Elements of Harmony", but Nightmare Moon vowed to return in 1,000 years. It cuts to Twilight reading the book next to a pond where she wonders where she would've heard about the Elements of Harmony previously, and that's the prologue to the first episode of this cult hit, a simple yet effective backstory. It sort of feels like the opening cutscene of a video game, you know the kind where it would play after the company logos but before the title screen?

After the title sequence is over, Twilight Sparkle is introduced to us as a 15 21 18 14 16 20 (in pony years) year old unicorn who studies magic and lives in a fancy library, but is a social outcast, very much outcasting herself through her antisocial behaviour, who would much rather spend time with her nose in a history book than with friends, except for her baby dragon companion, Spike, even if she acts to him as if she were an agitated older sister sometimes (I can relate to Spike, just saying). This is displayed through her not wanting to spend any time with what may have been her group of friends, simply rushing home, saying she's got important business to take care of. The thing is, we don't know just how important it is, but as the episode progresses, it gets much more serious, particularly at the end.

Another thing we learn about her is that she has a rather low opinion on everypony that isn't herself or Princess Celestia, revealed to be her mentor and teacher, but we don't see her until the end of the episode. This is shown via her attempting to notice the similarities between the fairy tale she had just read and the information regarding the Elements of Harmony in one of her many, many books regarding Equestria. The example provides a good showcase of her intelligent thinking, although I wonder why nopony had drawn similarities between the facts and fiction within the thousand years they had to analyse both accounts simultaneously, as well as realise that Nightmare Moon was planning on escaping on the thousandth night. Really, you could either say that Twilight is smart or all the other ponies are really dumb, even though it's trying to lean towards the former.

Twilight sends a letter to Princess Celestia about her discoveries, but Celestia writes back saying that Twilight should ignore it, not only that, but she sends her to a new town, Ponyville, to make some friends, particularly in preperation for the 1000th annual Summer Sun Celebration. I have to talk about the overall style of Ponyville now that it's that point in the episode. Visually, it looks like an average village, but with ponies, hence the name (which is kind of like calling a town Humanland if you think about it; I really hope hundreds of bronies haven't already made that joke even though this is my first time watching the episode and I was going in fresh). One thing I admire is that Canterlot, Twilight's original location, has a blue sky while Ponyville has a turqoise one, and complemented with the different aesthetics of the new location, which includes more houses and trees, it really does it's at feeling like a different location.

Now here comes the part of the episode in which Twilight and Spike are introduced to 5 ponies, which is my favourite part of the episode, as although I already know how these characters act and their distinctive personality traits, it's nice seeing how they were introduced to Twilight, and to an extent, most of the fans, and you know what, these are actually rather well-excecuted introductions.

The first pony Twilight sees is Pinkie Pie, who upon noticing that Twilight is new, gasps and runs away. This tells us very little about Pinkie Pie, the most you can say is that she moves and behaves much less realistically than other characters, being able to jump several feet into the air and dash off quickly like a cartoon. At the very least, she gives herself a more proper introduction to herself later in the episode.

The first pony that Twilight actually meets is Applejack, who works at a farm called Sweet Apple Acres and has a large Apple family, like most Southerners which is a very exaggerated and cartoony thing, but I wonder why they never appear in other episodes outside of Big Macintosh, Apple Bloom and Granny Smith. The reason Twilight meets up with Applejack is that she checking to see if everything at the 1,000th annual Summer Sun Celebration (explained in the opening), and was sent to see if everything with the food was in order, which was a smooth move on Celestia's part, as all her soon-to-be friends have something to do at the Summer Sun Celebration.

The second one is Rainbow Dash, who's in charge of the weather, but their relationship is already a bit more on the rocky side, as Rainbow Dash accidentally pushes Twilight into mud, then accidentally makes her too wet while trying to wash her with a cloud, and then accidentally makes her hair all messy while drying her with a mini cyclone, all the while Rainbow Dash giggles away at Twilight's misfortune, even if she tries to make things better. This sets up that Rainbow Dash is cheeky and still needs to learn a lot about respect, oh, and that she wants to train for "The Wonderbolts", an airshow/air force featuring pegasi (like herself), which puts the inclusion of her wings in her design to good use.

Next stop is decoration, where she finds Rarity, a fellow unicorn, decorating the town hall. Spike mentions she looks beautiful and instantly develops a crush on her, setting up a dynamic in which Spike falls bashful for Rarity whenever the two are onscreen together, which I find to be cute, considering Spike's like, what, 10? It's at this point that Rarity decided to fix Twilight up by taking her to her boutique and making her a dress, and then there's a brief montage of her putting several different items of clothing on Twilight, even though Twilight doesn't want to co-operate and would rather make her way to the next pony she has to meet with. When I say that Twilight doesn't want to co-operate, I mean that she takes her chance to escape as Rairty has her back turned, that's how desperate she is.

Lastly is the music, which will be provided by a timid pegasus called Fluttershy and her choir of birds, which aside from sounding rather soothing, also gives us an indication that Fluttershy can communicate with animals, and even talks directly to them, but when meeting Twilight for the first time, she can barely get her name out, which is adorable but also a bit sad seeing how far she's come with communication towards fellow ponies (taking Buckball Season into account, perhaps a bit too far). Like Phineas in the Phineas and Ferb episode Rollercoaster, it feels a bit odd seeing her acting like this so early in the episode, when throughout the rest of it, she's much less of a prototype for her usual self. Even the way she hides her face in her mane feels kind of compared to just being kind as seen in the second part of this story.

Also similar to Phineas, many of the ponies sound much younger, or at least higher-pitched than they do today. Perhaps the most notable example is Applejack, who sounded more like Miley Cyrus in the first couple episodes (remember, this was a time before Miley Cyrus went crazy), not because her voice actress, Ashleigh Ball, was going through puberty (she was 27 at this point), but because she wanted her to sound different from the other pony she played, Rainbow Dash, who sounds less like a woman with a slight voice crack and more like one of those boy characters, in which it just has the boyish inflection to it. Not to mention, Fluttershy also sounds much squeakier here, almost like Pinkie Pie whispering, compared to her deeper voice later on that sounds slightly motherly when she's around animals.

Finally, Twilight and Spike make it to what is called the Golden Oaks Library, where she intends to live in her time at Ponyville and continue her studies, but finds that it's overrun with a surprise party installed by Pinkie Pie, the first pony she saw, as Pinkie explains in a rapidly fast sentence that she threw a surprise party for her to initiate her into Ponyville, and her memories as she states to know everypony in Ponyville. The rapidly fast sentence thing as well as her bubble, hyperactive actions paint her as the show's comedy relief next to Spike, except wheras Spike is often seen going through either physical slapstick or giving a snarky comment about the situation at hand, Pinkie Pie performs crazier actions and has a tendancy to not really carry the appropriate emotion (ie, anything but happiness) for the situation at hand, especially in part 1's climax.

Twilight, not in the mood for a party, tries to cool down and pour herself a drink (Faust you clever
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!), but accidentally pours herself hot sauce. Pardon me if I read too into this, but this might be a metaphor of her still not being able to fit in, as you can see that the other poured drinks are green and already set up, but she pours herself a red drink because she wants to keep doing her own thing, which has some consequences.

She heads into the upstairs room where, after a night of the others partying, she still hasn't gotten any sleep, but she does have the opportunity to look out the window and notices Nightmare Moon's silhouette in the moon which abruptly disappears, which is a reminder to the audience that the legend is true and this, being the 1,000th year since she was locked up, will be the year she escapes. This leads to some speculation as to what's about to happen, but if you're like me you'd already know everything and it will all be about the execution of this idea, and that's the best way to describe my feeling towards this episode, it's in the execution, and if I like or dislike something, I'll oblige to point it out. This is a positive thing, as I've said.

The last scene takes place at the Summer Sun Celebration which everypony is attending and awaiting Princess Celestia's arrival to bring up the Sun, where Rarity and Fluttershy do their jobs, Twilight gets frightened over the prospect of the legend coming true, and Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie just have a good time, alongside hundreds of other friendly faces. This little bit of happy anticipation crossed with Twilight's more negative anticipation for the upcoming events lends itself to a change in mood without a change of mindset, and when it changes mood again (as explained in the next paragraph), the mindset is only increased.

That mindset being that Equestria's in danger of eternal night, as indeed Celestia doesn't turn up and Nightmare Moon appears to the ponies announces eternal night across the land, meaning that the legends were true and the rest of the equines have been percieved idiots (at least percieved from my point of view) for not realising this over the millennium they had to read between the lines! I'd expect them to bring up some other pony centuries ago who may have predicted, but Twilight seems to be the only one in the entire thousand year history to put on her thinking cap, even if it was two days before the infamous event took place. Essentially, go Twilight!

One criticism I have with this scene is Pinkie Pie. Since it's her flaw that she doesn't display the correct emotion for more serious moments at this point in the series, she kind of drags the seriousness of the scene down with her eccentric back-talking to Nightmare Moon, and it overall feels useless. I know that she's supposed to develop over time (this is a character-driven show that has a lot of character development), but this really just feels like it was put here to remind the audience that Pinkie Pie exists. I guess the reason most bronies are typically critical of their favourite characters is because they simply expect better from them, and I for one expect Pinkie Pie to be better, but that isn't a bad thing, as we want the show to be better and we want to explain why.

Also, I have to point out that, at one point, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scotaloo were all huddling together. Knowing their purpose later in the series, this is some serious foreshadowing, as to an average viewer in 2010, they were just regular fillies. It unintentionally makes me feel smarter going back to watch this.

Friendship is Magic part 2/The Elements of Harmony (Season 1, Episode 2)
Original Airdate: October 22 2010
Episode 2 non-compressed, Episode 1b compressed
Plot: Twilight Sparkle and her new friends have an adventure through thr Evergreen Forest to stop Nightmare Moon
Written by Lauren Faust

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Featured Song: Laughter Song

Nightmare Moon vanishes off into the distance, as everypony tries to figure out where she would've gone to. The 5 ponies that have been introduced (Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash in no particular order) follow Twilight back to the library, knowing that she was the only one to really know anything about Nightmare Moon, admittedly an appropriate action, and I can understand them being the ones to follow her because they're the only 5 to have had extended interaction with Twilight. This is one of those things that I have to note because a complaint about later seasons in regards to massive events in the show is that it doesn't feel like these 5 characters aren't present for them, so I'm just pointing out that they're here and they're contributing to the plot. As a sidenote, I don't think I'd be too bummed by entire important episodes in which they don't contribute or even appear, because at least Twilight would have the ability to talk to them about those sorts of things.

Back at the library, Twilight tucks Spike into bed so he can get some rest, as he was up all night partying with the others, and it gives Twilight an opportunity to interact with the others, as the first part was about being introduced to them, while this episode is being introduced to their purpose in the show, of which Spike's has already been fulfilled.

After Spike's put to sleep, Twilight tries to find another book about the Elements of Harmony, but is confronted about her friends, some of them even being angry with Twilight thinking she had something to do with the eternal night, which is just one of those "OMG you're new and are probably the cause of this mess-style" misunderstandings that I have seen way too much in Classic Doctor Who to take seriously in the 21st century, but at least it's over before it goes anywhere as Twilight explains that she simply knows of the legend and it's dark truth. Get it? Dark? Because it's gonna be nighttime forever?

Twilight and her new acquaintances (they're not really friends yet) find another book regarding the Elements of Harmony, specifically Pinkie Pie who sings that it was under "E", which is funny due to how cheerful it is, and unlike the ending of the last episode, it's in a more relaxing scene, so it's marginally more welcome. The book reads that they have to locate the "Castle of the Two Sisters", which is in the Evergreen Forest, if they want to do anything about Nightmare Moon and the Elements of Harmony (Honesty, Kindness, Loyalty, Generosity, Laughter and INSERT COIN TO CONTINUE GAME), and through all of this, I just have to say that reading books when the world is about to end really tells us alot about Twilight! At least it's a good lesson for the kids, as this was a point in time in which reading has become less and less popular among children (and it still is, and is probably even worse nowadays).

After this, we get my favourite thing about this two-parter as a whole, which is each of the Mane 6 discovering something about themselves relating to one of the Elements of Harmony, which is simply fantastic to watch. It's not even like they have to be in any particular order, considering how dense of a location the Evergreen Forest is in regards to it's designs and obstacles. I admire it when they mix around the orders of the ponies (minus Twilight), as it makes them all feel equal in regards to their role as Twilight's friends. My only problem with it is that it feels way too obvious, especially because they're each spelled out twice, but again, this was made to introduce the characters in greater detail.

Their first trial is them being thrust off a slippery slope, but most of them are able to stop themselves from getting close to the cliff, the ones having the misfortune of almost falling off being Applejack and Twilight. Twilight almost does fall off the cliff, but Applejack holds onto her, and then notices something below and says that she's gonna let go. Twilight is hesitant, but Applejack tells her it's the "honest" truth. Write that down in your notebook, because this is gonna be on the test, Applejack represents honesty. Twilight lets go and is saved by Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, who take advantage of their wings to carry her down softly, where Rarity and Pinkie Pie are waiting while Applejack simply hops down from platform to platform.

The second trial is a giant beast that has been set off by something. Some of the ponies try to battle it, but Fluttershy keeps quietly telling them to wait, until she just flat-out yells at them to stop, which shows me that although Fluttershy is soft-spoken, she can have a bit of a short fuse in situations where she knows how to handle the solution. In this case, she's able to tame the beast by simply talking to it and asking what's wrong, at which point it's funny seeing the beast simply pointing to his splinter, which Fluttershy removes, making the beast friendly, even going so far as to lick Fluttershy, which is somehow very adorable. She then says to Twilight that sometimes ponies need to show a little "kindness", which now brings us to 2 of the 5 known elements.

The third trial lands them in a dark area consisting of several tress with menacing faces on them, which frighten everypony except Pinkie Pie, who actually finds them to look rather funny. This gives me the feeling that it was nearly impossible for Pinkie Pie to feel fear this early on, and although that makes her much less three-dimensional than the other ponies, it does get them through the trial as she encourages them to take a minute and laugh at the now silly-looking faces. This is presented through the "Laughter Song", which has the same instrumentals and beat as the show's theme song, but it has Pinkie Pie singing an uplifiting message, finishing it by saying that the ordeal makes her want to "laugh". There's laughter down, so two more ponies have to show one of the virtues to realte to the elements.

The fourth trial involves a river that's difficult to cross, caused by a sea serpent (called Steven Magnet) who's upset over losing part of his moustache. I have to say that Steven look and sounds fabulous. Y'know…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2TjdjTSbMac
that sort of fabulous. Seriously though, he has the same sort of hairstyle. Anyway, back to the episode, Rarity is able to understand how he feels, and is just as upset as him about it, so she commits an act of "generosity" and cuts off a bit of her tail and attatches it to his nose, making the moustache look more complete. He thanks her, settles down and allows them a bridge by letting them hop across his body to the other side. Now we only have one more (known) element to fulfill, and that's loyalty.

As they come close to the Castle of the Two Sisters, they find that there's a bridge crossing over that's broken, so Rainbow Dash takes one part of it and flies over and attempts to tie it up, which is a good deed. However, she's stopped by the "Shadowbolts", who want Rainbow Dash to be part of their team, but Rainbow Dash says she has to assist her friends, to which they foolishly say that it's either them or her friends, so Dash presents her "loyalty" to the rest of the Mane 6 by finishing tying the bridge, causing the Shadowbolts to disapper into a blue glow. This would probably be one of the weaker ones when you take into account that anypony else could've done the right thing, but with Rainbow Dash, she's dealing with temptation, and as she's the only one at this point to actually have a dream for what she wants to become, part of the Wonderbolts, this trial fits her perfectly.

It's at this point that I should mention the blue glow has possessed all the troubles that lay ahead of them from the beginning of them entering the Evergreen Forest. It's obvious that it was Nightmare Moon in a ghostly shadow form trying to halt the Mane 6's progresses, and what makes it work is that each of the Mane 6 (minus Twilight, but shhh, that's for later) help each other out, and they wouldn't be able to move on without the right pony. This makes each of them feel useful, helped by the fact that none of the trials overstay their welcome in regards to the main plot.

They eventually make it up into the castle where they discover 5 of the Elements of Harmony have been encased in stone, presumably for years and years, and the sixth one is nowhere to be found. Twilight tries to use her magic on them to see what can be done, so the ofhers leave her to concentrate. As she's almost got it, Nightmare Moon appears to her, obviously not wanting her to do anything with the elements and tries to whisk them into another location, but takes Twilight as well, which hightens suspense and puts the audience in the mood for action. This is going to be where the sixth element is revealed, and this is going to be concerning Twilight, as all the others have already been identified.

This new location is where Twilight demonstrates her ability to teleport to different places using "magic", escaping Nightmare Moon chasing her and getting closer to the elements. Remember, "magic" is what has gotten her from one place to another. However, just as she's got a certain spark from the elements, Nightmare Moon breaks them, rendering Twilight seemingly unable to fix them. However, as her friends enter the room, Twilight feels that "spark", the spark of friendship, and is able to reassign the Elements of Harmony to each of her friends based on how they've helped each other out. This just feels awesome, as it's the penultimate scene in the episode and where everything aligns, they've recieved their elements (which have changed in appearance to resemble their "cutie marks", which is the first time the My Little Pony franchise ever gave a name to the ponies' butt tatoos) and somehow manage to trap Nightmare Moon inside a rainbow cyclone turning her into…

Princess Luna. Princess Celestia comes in to explain things, and all the ponies except Twilight bow down to her, which makes sense as Twilight will have had much more time with Celestia so this would feel more casual. Celestia reveals to them that Princess Luna is her younger sister and they were the sisters in that legend, which would nowadays be a no-brainer, and unfortunately that kinda speaks true. As Celestia and Luna raising the Sun and Moon respectively is perhaps their most recognisable traits, the reveal felt about as predictable as giving me an orange and saying that it originally came from a tree. It's just common knowledge to me.

After that's all said and done, Pinkie Pie breaks the 4th wall for the first time (of many) by saying that they should throw a party (specifically towards the audience) as the scene shifts to the aftermath as the Sun has risen back up completely, with Celestia and Luna being praised and supposedly a new era of Equestria beginning, what with the Elements of Harmony being bestowed upon Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rarity and Applejack (in order of search interest this time). One thing I like is when Luna is given a wreath by some very young pegasi, signifying that even the most innocent and impresionable fillies have forgiven her.

Twilight is bummed out to realise that she has to return to Canterlot after meeting such great friends, so Celestia strikes a deal with Twilight that she can continue to study in Ponyville as long as she sends a report about friendship every week (specifically every week from October 29 2010-May 6 2011), leading to a group hug that sets the mood for a show that has no end in sight, and yeah, to this day, there's still no end in sight. As I said in my post about the Phineas and Ferb episode Rollercoaster, it's great when a first episode (I know that these weren't the first episodes made, The Ticket Master was technically the pilot, but these are chronologically the first episodes, so it counts) gives us little hints that the adventure isn't over yet, as it gives it's new fans excitement for what the show's going to do next.

The final part is Pinkie Pie breaking the 4th wall again asking the audience if they're excited. Yes Pinkie Pie, on behalf on all those that may follow this thread, I am thoroughly excited. I'm excited to watch how you'll evolve as a character, I'm excited to see what's going to happen to you and your friends in the future, I'm exci- wait, it's all about Glim Glam now? :( Okay.

Sorry if this was more summarising the events of the episode than actually commenting on what makes it good. I guess that, like Pinkie Pie, I've got to grow into this show and it's customs. With that, these episodes, in my opinion, are rather solid, but nothing to write home about. Part of that comes from the rather obvious answers to questions that may be mystifying for non-bronies, and the humour isn't fully-formed yet, but neither are the characters telling the jokes either. With that said, it really makes me wonder how this got thousands of adults interested in the series. Don't get me wrong, it's fine entertainment for kids, but I just don't see that mature appeal yet, at least not in full force.

New Rating System
1-2= Corrputed
3-4= Bad
5-6= Average
7-8= Good
9-10= Harmonic

Celestial Scale: Good (represents what MLP:FiM stands for)
Numeric Scale: 7/10 (solid but not top notch)

Question of the Day 1: If you're a brony, when did you become one and what was the first episode you watched?
Question of the Day 2: Do you like going to the library?
Question of the Day 3: How do you feel when certain characters are overused or play too much of a role in a character-driven show? I used to be bummed out, but then Filli Vanilli showed me why it's a bad idea to shoehorn certain characters into situations that don't fit them.

Join me next time as the ponies have to deal with the idea of picking favourites. Until then, here's the episode's featured song, the Laughter Song.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vVipH-SWJxQ
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Question Answers:
1.) Somewhere around American Thanksgiving 2014, I was browsing TV Tropes and happened upon the recap section of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I've read the recap section already, but I decided to go more in-depth with it, and started getting more interested in it. The first episode I remember watching was the pilot back in 2010, but I wasn't as interested in the show as I was now. Another episode I remember watching before I became a pegasister was "Over a Barrel", where I thought Pinkie Pie was at her best here, especially her fourth wall breaking ending. XD
2.) Do I look like Twilight Sparkle?
3.)I felt like Twilight's presence in every Season 1 episode was a bit annoying, but since "Lesson Zero" started the trend of other characters (The Mane 6 and Spike) writing letters to Celestia, Twilight's roles in an episode have gone more to just being in the background to not appearing in an episode at all.

Pony Bits(No pun intended, considering the currency of Equestria): Are you sure this is My Little Pony? Because the last time I checked, there wasn't any butt-kicking action in it! -Bronies, 2010

One More Thing: Since Derpibooru is what introduced me to you, I will be addressing myself with my DB username, TheOtherPinkiePie for this forum. :)

Well, that's all I have to say! Now, if you excuse me, I have to giggle at the ghostly! TheOtherPinkiePie, out! ;)

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The Ticket Master (Season 1, Episode 3)
Original Airdate: October 29 2010
Episode 3 non-compressed, Episode 2 compressed
Plot: Twilight is given two tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, but all her friends want to go with her
Written by Amy Keating Rogers and Lauren Faust

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Featured Song: At the Grand Galloping Gala
Artwork by Jowybean, used without permission.

I've been having a hard time deciding which show to choose to dedicate the first week in my new era of reviewing to. If I chose The Simpsons, I'd have to get through it much slower so starting earlier wouldn't hurt, plus The Tracey Ullman Show can barely be considered a proper introduction by most fans. If I chose Phineas and Ferb, it would be a lot more fun for me on a nostalgic level, plus it's the only one I'm doing other than SpongeBob that typically has 11 minute segments. If I chose MLP:FiM, it would be a fresh new experience as I haven't really watched every episode, and it would give me more insight as to why people have such varying opinions on the show and when it either went from good to great or starting going downhill. I can't decide!

Hey, maybe I should watch the one about not being able to decide.

Although Friendship is Magic/All The Other Titles was the first story to be broadcast and obviously the first one chronologically, The Ticket Master was the first episode to be written, and as such, consitiutes as the show's pilot of sorts. That said, it's just a standard 22-minute episode and there isn't that much of a focus on the idea of it being an exciting new adventure as much as it is learning about the new characters' interests. Does this make it better or worse than the two-parter?

It begins after Twilight and Applejack have done farm work, cementing the idea this early on that Twilight is getting used to the lifestyles of her friends, even if she still has a lot to learn about them. Suddenly, Spike coughs up an invitation from Celestia (it's his thing that he delivers/recieves letters to and from Celestia orally), inviting Twilight to the Grand Galloping Gala, an annual event in Canterlot, and giving her an extra ticket to take one of her friends.

It's rather early on we're introduced to the theme of Twilight being hungry and unable to have food, which may be contributing to the stress that she goes through in this episode. Think about it, even if this were her first real dilemma with her new friends, her having no food throughout the entire day, even after paying for a meal only to have it ruined by rain, would be frustrating for anybody. As her friends aren't even aware of it that often, except for Applejack, it would make sense that she would be more mad with them. Taking this and the scene where she gets a pudgy belly after eating with the Apple family in the last episode, it appears as though an early trend I've noticed is that Twilight is linked to food. I guess Lauren Faust just wrote these episodes on an empty stomach (I mean, late 2000s recession and all, food would be hard have readily available).

What I like is that the ponies have pros and cons for their reasoning to go to the gala.
Applejack sees a business opportunity to save Sweet Apple Acres, but it'd be hard to believe that she'd make a lot of money
Rainbow Dash's dream of being noticed by the Wonderbolts has the potential to come true, but it's a rather risky attempt which would get her into serious trouble if she messes it up
Pinkie Pie simply wishes to have a ton of fun there in what she believes to be the biggest party ever, but there's nothing preventing her from having the life of a party, gala or no gala
Rarity wants to marry a prince, but that's completely ridiculous and a distant dream, even if she looks her best and even if she's now the Element of Generosity (depending on how widespread among the kingdom that title is, because it varies from episode to episode)
Fluttershy wants to see all the adorable animals in the gala's garden, but that doesn't involve actually going to the gala itself
Twilight doesn't have that much of a reason to go, but it's later explained that it's so she can meet up with Celestia again, and like with Pinkie Pie's reason, there's nothing preventing her from writing to Celestia via letters, which is the whole point of the series in it's earlier seasons
This isn't even taking The Best Night Ever into consideration, in which all their hopes and dreams are completely dashed (no pun intended), but even that doesn't exactly cover the problems presented here. It just goes to show expectation VS reality.

Having the ponies try and do extra favours in order to get on Twilight's good side is quite funny. It starts with Rainbow Dash, who'd be the most likely to do something so obviously motivated simply to impress Twilight, especially when it's within her comfort zone of clearing the clouds. Next Rarity makes her and Spike dresses for the gala, but Twilight sees right through her plans, as well as Applejack getting her food and Fluttershy cleaning the library (which in all fairness are simply good deeds, it's just Twilight's mind making them seem much more decieving). Once it gets around to Pinkie Pie, all it is is her singing a song about how she wants to go to the gala, which is brings to mind such forced motivation that it's really funny.

When it comes to characterization, it's much more of what you'd expect from the characters in any situation, but there's something about Rarity in this episode that's rather different. I guess it has to do with her voice sounding a bit different, a little bit lower without much enthusiasm even when she's excited (except from when she screams "Yes!" in her fantasy) and the way she fantasises about the gala being comparable to a royal ball, making her feel much more egotstical than I've come to see from her, probably because the fantasy goes on for a solid minute and is really saying a simple thing, she wants to marry Prince Blueblood.

Another character I should bring attention to is Angel Bunny, who in this episode is essentially Fluttershy's wingman and generally an animal companion. I bring this up because he's really the only animal that interacts with Fluttershy like a sentient creature throughout this episode, and as much most of the series, and at the moment I would say that he's feisty, but only because he cares about Fluttershy. However, I doubt he'll be as consistent as the others, as he isn't nearly as integral to the overall flow of the show as even Spike.

Speaking of which, I find Spike in this episode to be simply excellent. He represents the male audience's reactions to the show having a girly flair to it, yet he still enjoys it, unless it's to the extent of having to go to the gala, until the end. I believe he's essentially what Lauren Faust wanted the male audience to be, generally nice guys who have to be eased into the environment, and from then on, be on the same page as the female audience. Remember, I'm mostly talking about how she wanted young boys to react to the show, this isn't even getting into the chaos even she didn't know would ensue.

A scene that should be pointed out is the chase scene of Twilight and Spike trying to run away from various background ponies who were told by Pinkie Pie that Twilight's got an extra ticket, and I'm a bit mixed on this scene. The positive thing is that the chase scene itself is entertaining, seeing all the methods of escape Twilight and Spike try out, and Twilight using her magic to teleport away is a rather epic moment, because it's the first time she's done so around regular ponies (remember, the first was only around Nightmare Moon). On the negative side of things, it unintentionally makes the background ponies look like a dumb swarm of what Twilight's friends were before they each realised they were upsetting her, and that isn't really needed. Nevertheless, it doesn't bother me that much because the background ponies are just that, background ponies. You can write all the lesbian fan fiction about Lyra and Bon Bon that you want, but within the show itself, I don't care too much about their individual personalities.

Once Twilight's friends teleport themselves into the library (how else would they have all gotten there?), they all apologise and say that they no longer want to compete for the ticket anymore (oddly enough in order of eye colour), and Twilight, being unable to think of a solution, writes to Celestia that she's learnt that she can't take just one of her friends, as she likes them all equally. This is a rather decent message, as having Twilight pick a best friend out of 5 this early on, heck at any point in the series really, wouldn't be a good idea, as they'd have to promote them all equally, and fans have many varying ideas on who the best character is. Celestia writes back simply saying "Fine then, here's 6 tickets so you don't have to choose.", and gives all the girls their own ticket. Here's a little controversial question I just thought of; who got the original second ticket?

It's widely believed that this unintentional lack of understanding of Twilight's problem, even though it was a rather unfair predicament, is what started the short-lived belief that Celestia is a troll who likes to see the misery of other ponies for a laugh. Although this may be debunked with this obvious, she simply didn't understand what Twilight was going through, this interpretation actually affected Celestia's reputation among the fandom for a long time.

Lastly, the ending with Spike and Applejack is rather funny, with Applejack thinking that Spike's pretending to upchuck because the gala is a girls thing and telling him to snap out of it, but it's noteworthy that Applejack is the one getting upset at Spike, because within the show's continuity, this is still one of the first times they're interacting with each other and they haven't really formed a flawless bond yet. This makes it feel extra nice when Spike gets a ticket for himself and is super-excited about it, only for Applejack to simply look at him as if to say, "You're so cute when you're a hypocrite", and hey, all 10 year olds are.

One more little observation, how are the pegasi and earth ponies able to carry their own individual tickets via levitation? Are the tickets extra-magical or are golden tickets just the only thing they can carry telekinetically? This may be a case of the episode coming so early on and they hadn't figures out the individual properties for different pony species, or Twilight and/or Rarity was carrying them for the others. Either way you look at it, it's still a slightly glaring sign that this was rather early on.

I get the feeling that I like this kind of episode much more than Friendship is Magic, because as I said, it doesn't feel as though I'm looking at the Mane 6 as respectable authority-level heroes as much as I'm looking at them as friends, which is much more in tune with what the show is meant to be about. I guess the reason this doesn't make me look back on Friendship is Magic less fondly is because that episode was an introduction, so everything still felt simple (aside from eternal night and the threat of death and all that unimportant stuff). The kind of story in which it's simple and engaging for a newcomer, as I've seen across the episodes that are now considered classics of the first couple seasons for a good chunk of the fandom, ages much better than the big, epic episodes that, let's face it, are only going to feel important for a year or so before their contents are taken for granted by most bronies.

Celestial Scale: Good (represents what MLP:FiM stands for)
Numeric Scale: 8/10 (an enjoyable if not mildly flawed episode)
Higher than: Friendship is Magic
Current Position: #1 out of 2

Question of the Day 1: If you were given a ticket to the gala, what would be the most exciting thing for you to go there for going by the Mane 6's expectations?

Question of the Day 2: Who is best pony?

Question of the Day 3: What do you think of the Trollestia meme and if it's held up well?

The next episode is one which you might need to pay extra attention to. Until then, here's another Pinkie Pie song, because at this rate, we can never have enough of them. Seriously though, this song number is beautiful, from the eye-popping visuals to the cherry melody to Pinkie Pie's adorable singing voice.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BCkXuH8Xdo
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Question Answers:
1.)A ticket to The Grand Galloping Gala? Wow. If I were there, I'd like to chat and make new friends, because the Gala is very social.
2.)Oh come on! This is such an easy question. It's obvious the answer is Pinkie Pie. :)
3.)I imagine Celestia being a troll in private, as in always trolling Luna. XD The meme? Oh, the meme is still going on. Have you seen Derpibooru lately?

Pony Bits: I can't believe it! I've got two tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala! Now..who to give the second one to? Eh, oh well. (rips up the other ticket)

One More Thing: For the scale part, you put the Spongebob Scale instead of the Celestial Scale. You should change it so no-one would get confused.

Well, that's all I have to say. Now if you excuse me, I have to...RUN!!!!! TheOtherPinkiePie, out!

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Applebuck Season (Season 1, Episode 4)
Original Airdate: November 5 2010
Episode 4 non-compressed, Episode 3 compressed
Plot: Applejack has trouble balancing her responsibilities while getting rest, which causes problems for other ponies
Written by Amy Keating Rogers

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Artwork by Jowybean, used without permission.

Here we have the first episode to focus on a character that isn't Twilight, and even then, Friendship is Magic and The Ticket Master focused on introducing the Mane 6 as a group, with Twilight mostly being the observer to their already fun interactions. This is the first time we get to see another character bounce off the rest of the cast, and it's Applejack, which seems to be a smart decision, as she was one of the ponies with the most potential right off the bat. This is because she already seemed to have an entire life to herself introduced to us rather quickly in the form of Sweet Apple Acres. So how does this hold up?

The episode begins with a panning shot of Sweet Apple Acres, which shows hundreds upon hundreds of apple trees, amd despite it nowadays looking cheaper than a kiddie meal at Wendy's, it perfectly establishes that Sweet Apple Acres is simply gigantic. Applejack and Big Macintosh discuss how it may be a bit too much for Applejack to handle, seeing as how Big Macintosh has gotten himself hurt and Applejack is the only pony capable of bucking every tree. Big Macintosh (yes, he can talk, just role with it) says that it's all too much for Applejack to take care of, and Applejack starts a one-sided fight by saying that she's going to buck every last tree, even if it kills her. This displays that Applejack has a stubborn personality, especially in regards to her responsibilities, which is fine because she's shown to be a hard worker, even at this point in the series.

Sometime later, a stampede of cows almost hits Ponyville, but is diverted by Applejack and her dog Winona, prompting her to be considered a town hero by Mayor Mare. This scene shows Applejack's heroism and resourcefulness, which is nowhere to be found for the rest of the episode due to her pressuring herself to harvest all the apples she can. Also, seeing the cows, and later a mule, talk is pretty alarming to me. There's very little interspecies communication in later episodes, especially with Fluttershy being the "I can talk to squirrels"-type character, but that doesn't mean it isn't welcome here. Plus it gives respective personalities to the cows, middle-aged gossipy women, and the mule, basically some sort of unfortunate segregation joke. Honestly, are the mules and ponies segregated like early 20th century America? Though I will say, even from her introduction scene, Winona is very cute. That's really all I have to say about her, she's one adorable farm dog.

Another thing that's noticeable about this scene is that Pinkie Pie acts sillier in this episode's beginning, seemingly being unphased by the fact that Ponyville was almost trampled to bits by a herd of cows, even getting some popcorn for the occasion. I would say that this is because of Amy Keating Rogers' habit of flanderising Pinkie Pie's cartoony innocence, but Lauren Faust had already sorta established that she wasn't the brightest bulb when it comes to reacting to a threat at the end of Friendship is Magic part 1. I guess they realised that having her be constantly naïve wouldn't have been fun to watch, and I can totally see why it's funny the first couple times.

Later on, at an award ceremony, where Mayor Mare plans to give Applejack the "Prized Pony Award", Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy each interrupt Twilight's speach about how great of a friend Applejack is (which seems to be pretty long, seeing as how she only met Applejack a few days earlier) to talk about what they're going to do with Applejack later this week. This scene establishes that each of these 3 ponies have accepted Applejack as a town hero and are giving her extra commitments to congratulate her. However, when Applejack comes over to collect her trophy, she has bags under her eyes and seems to be acting very loopy, and it's because she hasn't had much sleep, even if it hasn't yet provided visual, auditory or behavioural repercussions.

Applejack progressively getting more and more tired is something I'm mixed on. It's good because it provides a reason that she needs help, but the bad thing is that it doesn't exactly make sense. During her first meeting with Twilight her vision gets blurry, the second causes her to go relatively deaf and the third gives her a bad attitude. It's rather odd that these don't all pile up over time to make Applejack completely dizzy and unfocused, but at the same time, this is just a nitpick, as each different event is meant to highlight a contributing factor to Applejack's declining concentration. I've also read somewhere that they were originally going to have Applejack headbutt the trees as opposed to kicking them with her hind legs, which the show calls "bucking", and yeah, that would've been a bit of a dangerous thing to show in what was originally an educational show.

As explained above, throughout the episode, Twilight tries to ask Applejack for assistance, seeing how she's working her flank off and it's starting to seriously affect her mentally. Even though her vision has started to get blurry, even talking to Twilight as a collective group of 3 ponies, she goes over to Rainbow Dash so she can do some stunts to impress the Wonderbolts. I like Rainbow Dash's little waiting pose, looking irritated and tapping her hoof, almost reminds me of…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWxYuIH1Xxg
…time to embrace the hate mail. Anyway, Rainbow Dash wants Applejack to bounce off a launch pad and propel her into the air, but because Applejack can't focus on the platform, she misses every time. Although I get that Rainbow Dash would scold Applejack for it, it's pretty needless, comsidering having her face planted onto the ground should be punishment enough for poor old Applejack.

Eventually, Applejack gets it right, but ends up shooting Rainbow Dash into the library's balcony due to Rainbow Dash not being ready that one time because Applejack messed up her balance. At the library, Rainbow Dash catches up with Twilight and says that it's Applejack's fault that she's been propelled there, so Twilight tries to confront Applejack again, only for Applejack's hearing to start fading so she can barely hear what Twilight's saying. Although it's entertaining seeing Twilight yell at Applejack over what should just be a simply conversation, and the joke with Twilight saying Rainbow Dash dropped by so Applejack says that was neighbourly of Rainbow Dash, I don't get how Applejack can be so deaf as to mishear "Can we talk?" as stuff like "Can bees squawk?", especially with the inflection in Twilight's voice where it would be hard to mishear it as such.

Her deafness proves to be a problem however when she goes to Sugarcube Corner and works with Pinkie Pie, even more unfortunate is that this is apparently Pinkie Pie's first day running Sugarcube Corner all by herself, which Mr and Mrs Cake, the owners, are concerned about. I can totally see why, because even though Pinkie Pie is canonically 20-ish, she acts barely half that age, even today. Something that always bothered me is how when Applejack mishears Pinkie Pie when she's reading out the recipe, her voice is slowed down as opposed to being more quiet. It's funny to hear coming out of Pinkie Pie of all ponies, but I really have no idea how you're supposed to hear in slow motion, even if you're tired.

After Applejack mishears the recipe and it gets baked, all the ponies who had the tainted baked goods get really sick, some even vommitting. That's actually rather brutal, but seriously, what made Pinkie Pie think it was a good idea to mix all that [potato chips, soda, lemon, earthworms] up to begin with? Even then, muffins with just chocolate chips, baking soda, flour and wheat germ doesn't sound too good. I'd know, as I've baked muffins before myself. I guess there were other disgusting things Applejack added which got cut for time, because that's really the only explanation I can think of.

It's at this point that I should mention Spike doesn't appear much compared to the first two episodes, and he mainly serves as comic relief. I think I've said this before, but Spike is usually who the writers resort to for comic relief whenever Pinkie Pie plays a bigger role, as her comic value is to be expected more. That said, in this episode, Spike is simultaneously funny and cute, but really more cute than funny. Him continuing to eat the baked bads even though they made several ponies sick is justified because he's a different species, and ew, boys are gross in girls cartoons, am I right?

Twilight goes back to Sweet Apple Acres to inform Applejack of the trouble her "baked bads" have caused, but at this point, Applejack's gotten too worked up over getting the applebucking done to be nice to Twilight. Her bad attitude seriously affects her activity with Fluttershy where they're supposed to count the newborn bunnies from that Summer. The key is to not be aggressive, but Applejack and Winona herd them up with force, causing them to freak out and even launch a stampede across Ponyville. They even repeat the scene of Rainbow Dash calling the stampede and ponies panicking from earlier in the episode, and even if the threat of bunnies is much less than that of cows, it's still caused problems for the town, specifically the ponies that take care of plants and vegetables. I have to say seeing their over-the-top, melodramatic reactions to the event is rather hilarious.

I have to say that, at this point, there's been a neat incline in threat that the episode has portrayed. It started with Applejack saving the town, before causing problems with one pony, then going on to cause problems for many ponies, then after that, nearly destroying the town, or at least instigating another stampede. It almost makes the episode feel like a parable, in that the main character starts off as a hero, and ends up being a failure through unwise actions. I guess I'm looking a bit too deep into the storytelling, but this is an episode that really sticks out to me in regards to story.

Twilight confronts Applejack one last time, notably atop a hill with only one apple tree visible, which I have to say makes for a very cinematic shot, where Twilight humourously rattles off all the dilemmas Applejack's created for Ponyville alliteratively, after which Applejack shows off that she's harvested the apples off of every tree in Sweet Apple Acres. This shows that she's shown more dedication to her work than her friends this entire time, but given how she's only had one main motive since the beginning of the episode, that is to be expected. However, Big Macintosh then mentions that there's about half of Sweet Apple Acres to go, which causes such a great shock to Applejack that she faints, and when she wakes up, she practically begs Twilight for help for Sweet Apple Acres. That was a rather good way of getting the message across to Applejack, I'm going to be Honest.

Twilight writes her letter to Princess Celestia talking about it's okay to let other ponies help you, and this is where the audience realise that Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy seeking help from Applejack was a friendly thing for them to do. Applejack shutting Twilight off is justified, as they made her completely stubborn over the right thing, her job, and by proxy, her family. This really is a good moral for an Applejack episode. In fact, it's a rather original moral, as most shows would have an episode or two about not slacking off and always putting your best foot forward for everything
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hint hint, so it's nice to see this show already subverting the norm for TV so early on.

To sum up, Applebuck Season was an adequate way to start off an era in which specific ponies were given more attention than others. It has a very good moral, but that's the best thing about the episode. The rest of it is good, but it has a few problems here and there. It certainly reminds me that there were still good episodes in Season 1 and gives me hope that this lucky streak is bound to continue.

Celestial Scale: Good (represents what MLP:FiM stands for)
Numeric Scale: 7/10 (solid but not top notch)
Lower than: The Ticket Master
Higher than: Friendship is Magic
Current Position: #2 out of 3

Question of the Day: Would you try a Baked Bad?

No need to be huffin! and puffin', because I'm slitherring into an episode that I'm sure I'll be ravin' about. Until then, if you need help, you should just listen to this song, it'll make you feel more secure.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWP6Qki8mWc
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Question Answer:
Maybe for a dare.

Equestrian Bits: Who's a silly pony? Who is? You is, Applejack!

One More Thing: Is it just me, or is this review shorter than usual?

Well, that's all I have to say. If you excuse me, I need to buck all these apple trees all by myself with no help from no pony! TheOtherPinkiePie, out! ;)
 

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Is it just me, or is this review shorter than usual
It's longer than my review for The Ticket Master, but shorter than most of my Season 2 SpongeBob reviews. As I'm only just starting off with this show, it'd be hard for me to write so many words about it. Although, I think the two title cards may make it look shorter to you.
 

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1. Friendship is Magic - Part 1: 0.5/10

This episode is very badly written, has awful pacing, and absolutely no funny jokes.

2. Friendship is Magic - Part 2: 0/10

This episode has all the problems of the first episode, but even worse. The pacing is even more awful and everything is rushed. The characters are so stupid and badly written. (Why couldn't Applejack tell Twilight straight up that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy would catch her? Is she the Element of Honesty or the Element of Blind Faith?) Luna's redemption was unbelivable and stupid and all in all, this episode just terrible.

As always, the only good part is Pinkie Pie, who should really have a TTG-style spin-off.

3. The Ticket Master: 7.5/10

This is probably the only episode of the show that I would say is actually good quality. It's pretty funny and well written for the most part, with good writing, jokes, and characterizations. The only awful part was the schmaltzy ending.

4. AppleBuck Season: 2/10

Episode was just dumb.
 

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Yakity-Sax (Season 8, Episode 18)
Original Airdate: July 20 2018
Episode 187 in standard order, Episode 183 in airing order
Plot: Pinkie Pie picks up a new musical instrument that her friends hate the sound of
Written by Michael P. Fox and Will Fox

I really didn’t think I’d have to update this topic. I only reviewed a few Season 1 episodes in late 2016, before suffering burnout and focusing my energy back on SpongeBob episodes. That turned out to be a great move, as my reviews have been getting better, cleaner and more fun to read. I’ve got a better feel for what makes SpongeBob tick, but I’ve always wanted to go to a different show as the demand for new SpongeBob reviews slows down, and what weirder place to start from than My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic?

I’ll admit, I got a bit of a brony rush back in 2016, a while after it was relevant. Being introduced to the cartoon community gets you to strange places, and I was a pretty avid follower of the show in Season 6 and 7 (weak seasons in retrospect). Granted I didn’t watch every episode, only the ones that interested me, and I still don’t feel like watching every last episode due to personal reasons I’d rather not get into, but I still have fond memories of the episodes I liked, and pretty horrible feelings about the episodes I didn’t. After the movie (which I also didn’t watch), I layed low on the show and didn’t pay much attemtion to it, but I caught this one due to Comic Con fever. It also happens to be a pretty awful episode and a reason why I stopped watching.

The story opens up on Fluttershy and Angel (her pet bunny) picking some berries in the forest when they hear a horrible noise. Fluttershy thinks it’s an animal in pain, but after some suspenseful running, finds it to just be Pinkie playing some sort of large woodwind called a Zenithrash. There are a couple things I like about this opening, like the suspense it builds and the shift from forest to to more general scenery as Fluttershy leaves it, but what kills it for me is the instrument Pinkie plays. It sounds like some sort of groaning bear mixed with farting when heard from the forest, but when you see Pinkie Pie playing it, it sounds like 3 drunk Scotsmen playing different bagpipes.

The horrible sound it makes happens to be a reason I’d hesitate to rewatch this episode. It’s not just ear-grating and incomprehensible, it sounds evil, as if Pinkie Pie were a villain. Even if the Zenithrash is supposed to sound bad, which Twilight assures her friends it isn’t, it shouldn’t sound so demonic. It’s gonna be Hell comparing this to Post-Movie SpongeBob, but notice how in Earworm, the Musical Doodle sounds bright and campy, yet it’s still meant to be a bland, repetitive song that drives SpongeBob insane. In Yakity-Sax, happy song-singer and former Beatles member Pinkie Pie (don’t ask) being this terrible with a musical instrument feels wrong on many levels.

The Zenithrash quickly gets on everypony’s nerves, and I mean everypony. When Pinkie plays it, the whole town off Ponyville goes into a panic and everyone runs away except for her best friends. Remember that Pinkie Pie hosts parties and makes those around her smile, she’s the Element of Laughter. Her getting way too attatched to something that drives people away from her, and not even making it funny, goes against her character and what she stands for. The plot should’ve belonged to someone like Rainbow Dash. Maybe even Starlight Glimmer, because they need to give her at least one legitimate character flaw for me to find her interesting.

Because of how horribly she plays, Twilight and the others are about to say how much they hate it, but Pinkie Pie gushes about how much it makes her happy, as if it’s the only great thing to ever happen to her. Because she seems to like the Zenithrash so much, they decide to let her off and see things get gets better, but Pinkie’s playing somehow only gets worse and more annoying. She even plays it in different places just to get her friends to listen, only for it to backfire for them in several ways. For instance, it wakes up all of Fluttershy’s friends, even though she clearly signals for Pinkie not to play it, and it causes the apples at Applejack’s farm to spontaneously combust. I’m fine with some cartoonish exaggeration, as this is Pinkie Pie we’re talking about, but when it comes at the expense of her best friends, who are suffering enough already, that’s messed up.

The other Mane 5 eventually crack and come together to say they don’t like it, but are still hesitant. No matter how immature they think Pinkie Pie is, it’s hard to see why it’s hard for them to break the ice, given how she’s getting in the way of their lives now. Sure Pinkie’s reaction’s extreme, but they don’t know that, they assume she’ll be bummed for a day then be fine. Heck, they have to toss the task of telling the truth between them because none of them want to. Eventually Twilight tells her that it’s something she needs to give up the Zenithrash, and Pinkie doesn’t take it well. She pretends to be fine, but goes upstairs and cries. That’s the end of Act 1, and if it weren’t for Pinkie crying, this would be a terrible yet consistent plot.

A couple days later, Twilight wonders where Pinkie is, and her friends point out that she’s walking around the streets depressed, and making everything she comes into contact with depressed. This is my biggest problem with the episode, and to an extent why the show’s fallen over the past 3 years. Pinkie’s sadness here is far too realistic for the world of Equestria, let alone the target audience. What made the breakdowns of characters more fun way back in Suited for Success and Party of One was that they were still themselves to an extent. Rarity was still a drama queen, and Pinkie Pie was still eccentric, and they were still entertaining and silly without coming off as grim. This episode revels in making Pinkie Pie clinically depressed, slowly losing her colour and saying things like “I feel nothing”. I know the show’s popular with (relatively weak) adults who go through these tough emotions often, but they should put the young girls first. Otherwise they’ll be confused with the themes of this episode, or get the wrong idea and laugh at it.

The Mane 5 decide to band together and make Pinkie feel happier, but nothing works, and she only gets moodier and greyer. Even stuff that she routinely loves like partying and baking leave her empty. This feels like it was written for a different episode (if not a different show), because the reason Pinkie’s so depressed is because her friends don’t like an annoying instrument she’s playing. It gets to the point where she disappears from Ponyville entirely, on the day her friends throw a Pinkie Pie Appreciation Day no less (which I hope becomes a July 20 tradition). Given her suspicious absence, and her room in Sugarcube Corner getting packed up, it evokes the gross feeling that she commited suicide! That may seem a bit extreme, but I’ve been down this path before, and my thoughts were that dark. Pretty much anyone over the age of 10 can draw a connection between depression and suicide, and that’s sick because this episode seems to be aiming for that older crowd!

As it turns out, Pinkie hasn’t harmed herself in any way, she’s just moved out of Ponyville, and has got her sister Maud to dispose of her stuff and move it back to the rock farm. The Mane 5 question Maud for a bit, and amidst her overdone “literal-minded” shtick, she tells them she’s moved to Yakyakistan. In case you don’t know, that’s where all the yaks in the show live, in what is essentially like a Norse colony. Pinkie’s friends head there, and find a club where a yak’s playing the Zenithrash. One thing’s off though, it’s good. Twilight was right when she said that the Zenithrash has a great sound, but why wasn’t Pinkie Pie able to grasp it despite days of practice? Let me guess, is it because the new writers think she’s just “the stupid one”?

Speak of the grey devil, they see Pinkie Pie in the club and talk to her, despite a joke 20 seconds earlier being yaks shushing Rainbow Dash because the song’s so good. They convince Pinkie to play the Zenithrash again without judging, but then she goes onstage and remains terrible. This resolution would mean so much more if Pinkie played from the heart and made something good, but she’s still a novice at best and an earsore. Her friends and the yaks love it anyway though, which makes me thing the terrible playing was something added in at the last minute, I guess to be funnier. It concludes a terrible story that doesn’t have a clear moral. If it’s “cheer your friends on even if you don’t like what they do”, then it’s muddied by the unbearable first act.

More than just being dark and frustrating, the story leaves so many unanswered questions. How did Mr and Mrs Cake handle Pinkie’s new fascination, especially since they have babies? Where did Pinkie get the Zenithrash in the first place? She could’ve said it’s from Prince Rutherford, but he doesn’t appear in the episode, nor does Ponyville’s resident yak Yona. That makes it very bland to just see generic yaks in the end. Most importantly, what does this episode say about Pinkie Pie’s mental state? I’ll delve more into this in the characters section, but it seems like she has a mental illness now. It feels like these past couple seasons have been trying to get darker, but there’s a place for stories about wasteland timelines, mass kidnapping and education politics, and My Little Pony isn’t it.

Although not a purely comedy show like SpongeBob, MLP:FiM has its fair share of jokes in every episode, but there’s not much to laugh about here. At least I hope not. The funniest joke is when the ponies get Gummy (Pinkie’s small pet alligator) to fetch her, and have a hard time reading him. Even Fluttershy, who can talk to animals, doesn’t sense him speaking. Some of the other jokes are tasteful, but they go on for too long, like Maud replying to people asking her for questions. The jokes about how bad the Zenithrash sounds when played poorly are annoying, and the jokes about Pinkie losing her will to live are too dark for the show. I wouldn’t be surprised if there was a suicide joke in one of the episode’s drafts, before being omitted because this show has stronger censorship than SpongeBob.

At least the animation’s on-par with the rest of the show, though there are trivial problems I have with it. The Zenithrash looks like a Scottish bagpipe, despite the yaks being Norse? For a show that wants to welcome different cultures, they’re really putting Medieval Europe in a box. That’s my only gripe with the animation, the rest of it’s fine. Although I don’t like how it’s handled in the story, I like Pinkie Pie’s “Pinkamena” look coming back, and how she slowly loses her colour, except for her tongue for some reason. The inside of her mouth goes grey, but her tongue remains orange. It reminds me of Discord’s corruption on her and the rest in The Return of Harmony, though it’s much more gradual here and sadly implies that it takes place over the course of days.

So about those characters. Twilight’s meant to be the level-headed member of the Mane 6, but she seems to calm here. Shouldn’t she be the worst affected by the Zenithrash, given how much concentration goes into her responsibilities? Pinkie’s other friends, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Applejack and Rarity, are all affected in bad ways, but them feeling that way’s meant to be a bad thing. It’s either let your friend enter a bitter downward spiral of emptiness, or have Rarity’s job of fashion-making put at risk or put Rainbow Dash in 2nd place. You have to wonder how bad Pinkie must’ve behaved for the time-bendingly fast Rainbow Dash to get beaten. One of the only two other characters to have some role in the story is Maud, and she’s very uninteresting when an episode’s not about her.

Then there’s Pinkie Pie. In case you didn’t know, she’s my favourite character on the show, mainly for how happy she is. Sure she can be a bit annoying at times, but only if it’s all in good fun. Those are the two reasons I hate how she’s portrayed here. She’s around her early 20s, yet she seems like a legitimate threat to her friends’ jobs. Even worse, it’s how depressed she gets in the last two acts that honestly makes me hate this episode more than SpongeBob’s Are You Happy Now?. At least there, Squidward is a middle-aged grump who’s in a tough spot in life. Pinkie Pie, to me, is youthful, cheerful and her life’s as good as she wants it to be. It could be that she’s been losing her happiness for a couple years now. Recent Pinkie-centric episodes like Secrets and Pies and The Maud Couple have shown her increasingly unhinged as the innocence of her world breaks down, bit again, this is the sort of mature subject matter that shouldn’t be in a show for little girls.

It’s a shame this episode had to be so bad. I get the sense this show’s wanted to grow up alongside its audience, and now that the kids who grew up on the first 4 seasons are now teenagers, I guess it was time for them to tell stories that’d relate to them. Couldn’t there be an obvious tonal shift though? Can’t the show get a higher content rating? Without a definitive leap to say “we’re for an older crowd”, Season 6-8 have struggled to maintain the show’s...spark. I have no idea if this is the show’s nadir, but I hope it’s really close. As I’ve already said, it’s dark, frustrating and all-around unpleasant. I know I can’t and shouldn’t really speak for little girls, but this is an episode they shouldn’t watch. As for everyone else, I think Pinkie’s Zenithrash-playing should be enough to scare you away, unless you’re a diehard brony who can’t see any problems in the newer seasons.

Final Verdict: Bad 3/10 (barely anything has merit to it)

Question of the Day: Should I revive this topic and just review episodes in any random order?

Sorry for the quickness of this review. I was pretty shocked with this episode and had to get my opinion on it out of my system. It’s an ugly feeling when you come back to a long-running series you liked and found it’s gotten much worse, but hey, that’s why most of us are on this site in the first place.
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