It was late, so I couldn't think of names. I like SpongeBob calling his son Junior though.More_Spongebob said:I loved that ending to an already great story. I'm not sure if I like Sandy's new ability, or the name for Spongebob Jr. (Remember Rock-a-bye- Bivalve?) But other than that, it's great. If the second movie will be any better than this I would actually be surprised!
Thanks! I got good potential ideas for stories. Also, about Spandy, them actually being together is exclusive to this one idea. All my other ideas will be more on their dynamic as friends than as a romantic couple. I only put them together in this story because this is my ideal finale for the show, and it kinda works.The Strangler said:Incredible story. I've been into writing fanfics recently and none of mine are as good as your story. I hope to see more stories from you. Even though I don't support the idea of spandy, I love your story and you made me appreciate it. Good job!
So does this work?Gary_Look_Doubloons! said:this is a link from your computer, u need to upload the PDF to google drive
agreed, the convo between Spongebob and Squidward was a little strange and really caught my attention. I looked it over for a bit, but after just moved on without really saying anything. That is one of the only things I noticed that needed improvement.That One Random Boss said:Quick late note. If any of you guys noticed, my dialogue needs improvement when it comes to SpongeBob and anyone else other than Sandy. Notice how I can pull off full-on conversations between SpongeBob and Sandy, but in the beginning I gave Patrick, Squidward, and Mr. Krabs only one sentence at a time. Take Ch. 4 for example. Squidward's conversation with SpongeBob while eating was quick and awkward, yet look at the conversation between SpongeBob and Sandy in Ch. 7. That was full-on and continuous. Maybe some tips would do for me to improve. I still have the Docs file for the story so there's room for me to add more.
awesome, more to the storyThat One Random Boss said:Okay how about this? I am typing at Vegas atm. On my way here, I had this crazy daydream. Thanks to that daydream, I feel like adding a few more chapters to the story. Remember how the journey is 3 days long? I want to extend it to 5. Trust me. I got more planned out than you think.